Saturday, May 27, 2006

roundandroundandround

Sometimes i ache
For the weight
Of another person

I lie awake
And wait
For the air to thin
My heart to slow
Jaws to ease
So I can breathe
And fall into sleep

7 Comments:

Blogger Dave said...

Lovely. And so true.

12:21 PM  
Blogger TheDragon said...

Lovely.

*Dabs at tragic tear with lace handkerchief*

1:22 PM  
Blogger MinCat said...

awww thanks. it was a 3am poem so i had my doubts though.

5:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

does it work? does it, really? do you fall asleep? do you, really?

lemont.

8:45 PM  
Blogger MinCat said...

hmmm ida thought the answer was rihgt there in the bit about wait. :) i know that i eventually find i wake up and its morning

10:50 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well written! Strong words, those.

7:08 PM  
Blogger MinCat said...

ta laemo :D

9:34 PM  

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