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i had a dream about you the other night.
i was asleep and you came upto me and wrapped yourself around me so that when i woke up i was enveloped in you.
it made me smile, in my sleep.
so that when i woke up bereft i was disconsolate.
one more whiskey, one more cup of tea, one more night like that, no? it would have made all the difference.
i was asleep and you came upto me and wrapped yourself around me so that when i woke up i was enveloped in you.
it made me smile, in my sleep.
so that when i woke up bereft i was disconsolate.
one more whiskey, one more cup of tea, one more night like that, no? it would have made all the difference.
posted by MinCat at 5:36 PM
11 Comments:
*blank space to signify solidarity and an understanding that I can say nothing that would help*
its ok love :) im a big big girl in a big big world. next time ill have the extra night.
muah
i think so. i think ive finally changed my definitions of what poetry is.
do you think so?
see line breaks v useful, but rhyme v v v v powerful. i love rhyme. its truly power ot the poet, cos rhyme is so self reflexive. in a way the line breaks arent.
Wot kria said, but more so, as I no nuffink.
no nuffink? tut tut we aint that bad :) but thanks to you too.
no, it wouldn't have. you were right this afternoon. somethings, some people, are best left alone, get closure and move on.
Why don't you visit my blog any more? We won a cricket match yesterday.
I do hope you're not so caught up in yourself that you've forgotten how to comment on the sites of your elders.
wot the woim saiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiid hehehe im drunk so sorry dave sir.
i wilk comment. only i neve rknow wot to say im sowwie i rea eveeyr single post tho i sweeearer
just as the bold and the beautiful
has stood its ground
so stands kria's abode where love resounds
crappy poetry? rhymes and garbles?
everybody knows i've lost my marbles
so shall stanc be forced to eject
this insipid insect
for he works less and less
day by day
still
for all his mess
he's getting a crazy pay!
=)
atmxixwx: feeling of being next to a nuke about to explode
oudukbwu: feeling of spite towards the japanese for creating sudoku
hey hey HEY! not a word against my suku baby!
:D
hiya silly
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